Those of you who know me, know that I am totally and completely addicted to M*A*S*H. Yes, I know the final season was nearly thirty years ago. And yes, I know it's a bit over the top to use the theme song as the ring tone on my cell phone. But I can't help it. M*A*S*H is simply the best.
Beginning in March 2010, I watched the entire series, in order, from start to finish. It took three months. Although I'd seen most of the episodes over the years, I wanted to watch the entire series so that I could see the arc of each main character as well as the arc of the war.
I wanted to share some of those lessons with you because I think they apply to writing.
1. Be careful with the back story. The writers were very crafty at only inserting back story as it was needed and pertinent to the scene or episode. The Pilot doesn't begin with a list of characters, followed by each life story. We get it piece by piece, episode by episode. It makes the characters more compelling because the viewer thinks they might find out something new about a character at any time. For instance, even though we know Houlihan's dad was career Army, we don't know how tough he was on her until we he comes to the 4077th. It explains a lot about her constant need to fit in and her desire to be praised.
2. Keep a balance between humor and drama. Even though the front is only three miles from the 4077th, the characters are constantly playing pranks and getting off stinging one liners. If the show had only been gloom and doom, it wouldn't have had an eleven year run. Viewers learned little about the nuts and bolts of the Korean War. Instead, we learned how people cope with a reality that's so overwhelming. The show was about the people, not the war.
3. Know the difference between internal and external conflict. Even though the Korean War is the whole reason the characters are together, it's really a small part of the show. It's the driving EXTERNAL conflict of the entire show. However, the real cog is INTERNAL conflict. Hawkeye's pacifist viewpoint clashing with the need to carry a gun, Frank's struggle with his love for Margaret when he's got a wife and kids at home, BJ's conflict with his wife taking an evening waitress job because they need the extra money while he's in Korea. The EXTERNAL conflict is easy and constant. The INTERNAL conflicts are subtle and are brought about, in many ways, by the character's individual reaction to the external conflict.
While the above lessons are all about craft, I learned one important lesson about the business of writing.
4. You've got to start somewhere. Lots of super-soon-to-be-famous people got bit parts on M*A*S*H. Patrick Swayze, Blythe Danner, Lawrence Fishburne. Thirty years later, these are all household names, but not so when M*A*S*H began. So hang in there. It just takes a while to get noticed.
If any one's hosting a M*A*S*H trivia party, call me. I'll bring the martinis.
M*A*S*H-a-maniac: What the show taught me about writing
Posted by
Lateia Elam Sandifer
on Wednesday, June 30, 2010
Summer Reading: Some Great Finds
Posted by
Lateia Elam Sandifer
on Friday, June 25, 2010
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'Tis the season for great reads! Here are a few books---some old, some new-- that are really worth the investment:
Non-Fiction
THE DEVIL AND SHERLOCK HOLMES: TALES OF MURDER, MADNESS AND OBSESSION by David Grann
This is a collection of eleven non-fiction pieces that appeared in publications like The New Yorker. They are all unique, well-written and interesting. If you like quirky trivia, and good, clean reporting, this is the book for you. While you're reading Grann, be sure to check out his last one, THE LOST CITY OF Z, which just came out in paperback.
FOR ALL THE TEA IN CHINA: HOW ENGLAND STOLE THE WORLD'S FAVORITE DRINK AND CHANGED HISTORY by Sarah Rose is an interesting biography of Robert Fortune, a nineteenth century plant hunter who traveled to China, on behalf of the East India Company, to acquire plant material and the skills necessary to build tea plantations in India. Part espionage, part history, the book is a delicious brew that will appeal to foodies, travelers, tea drinkers, and anglophiles.
Suspense/Thriller
Nelson DeMille has a new one on the shelves! I was thrilled with his return to the Gold Coast last year and now he's returning to the characters---including John Corey---from THE LION'S GAME. The new one takes place after 9/11. It's hard to beat a good beach chair and several hundred pages of DeMille. It's titled, simply, THE LION.
Check out faculty alum Jackie K. Cooper's review of THE LION here.
http://www.jackiekcooper.com/BookReviews/TheLion.html
Romance
Tessa Dare is one of my new favorite voices in romance. She now has five or six books out in paperback. I recommend that you start from the beginning and check out GODDESS OF THE HUNT. You won't be disappointed!
Upmarket (Book Club) Fiction
THE TALE OF HALYCON CRANE is hard to beat. It's a quick read filled with creepy Victorian houses, an isolated island community, murder and family secrets. The author, Wendy Webb, worked as a newspaper reported for more than twenty years. The result is that her prose is crisp, clear and well-paced.
You also should check out HONOLULU by Alan Brennert. It's the story of a woman who leaves her family in Korea to become a picture bride in Hawaii at the turn of the twentieth century. In short, it's awesome.
General Fiction
Mma Precious Ramotswe is back in Alexander McCall Smith's latest book, THE DOUBLE COMFORT SAFARI CLUB. This book is just what readers have come to expect from this series: kind, insightful, and deliciously African.
Sci-Fi/Fantasy
I'm back on the Robin Hobb kick. She has a new one out called DRAGON KEEPER and it takes place in Rain Wilds, part of the same world as the Mad Ships Trilogy and the Assassin Trilogy. I went back and read the first two trilogies again and loved them even more.
Middle Readers
The Golden Hamster series, by Dietlof Reiche, and illustrated by Joe Cepeda is a terrific series for kids AND parents. I enjoy reading these as much as the kids. They are funny, unique and surprisingly literary for the age group. Start with the first book where the reader is introduced to the incomparable Freddy. It's called I, FREDDY.
Post if you've read or are reading any of these. I'd love to talk books! Be sure to post or email with your suggestions. We all love a good book.
I'll be back later with some more ideas. I'm looking at my TO READ pile right now and I see a mystery, some general fiction, and some more non-fiction. I'll post suggestions all summer.
Non-Fiction
THE DEVIL AND SHERLOCK HOLMES: TALES OF MURDER, MADNESS AND OBSESSION by David Grann
This is a collection of eleven non-fiction pieces that appeared in publications like The New Yorker. They are all unique, well-written and interesting. If you like quirky trivia, and good, clean reporting, this is the book for you. While you're reading Grann, be sure to check out his last one, THE LOST CITY OF Z, which just came out in paperback.
FOR ALL THE TEA IN CHINA: HOW ENGLAND STOLE THE WORLD'S FAVORITE DRINK AND CHANGED HISTORY by Sarah Rose is an interesting biography of Robert Fortune, a nineteenth century plant hunter who traveled to China, on behalf of the East India Company, to acquire plant material and the skills necessary to build tea plantations in India. Part espionage, part history, the book is a delicious brew that will appeal to foodies, travelers, tea drinkers, and anglophiles.
Suspense/Thriller
Nelson DeMille has a new one on the shelves! I was thrilled with his return to the Gold Coast last year and now he's returning to the characters---including John Corey---from THE LION'S GAME. The new one takes place after 9/11. It's hard to beat a good beach chair and several hundred pages of DeMille. It's titled, simply, THE LION.
Check out faculty alum Jackie K. Cooper's review of THE LION here.
http://www.jackiekcooper.com/BookReviews/TheLion.html
Romance
Tessa Dare is one of my new favorite voices in romance. She now has five or six books out in paperback. I recommend that you start from the beginning and check out GODDESS OF THE HUNT. You won't be disappointed!
Upmarket (Book Club) Fiction
THE TALE OF HALYCON CRANE is hard to beat. It's a quick read filled with creepy Victorian houses, an isolated island community, murder and family secrets. The author, Wendy Webb, worked as a newspaper reported for more than twenty years. The result is that her prose is crisp, clear and well-paced.
You also should check out HONOLULU by Alan Brennert. It's the story of a woman who leaves her family in Korea to become a picture bride in Hawaii at the turn of the twentieth century. In short, it's awesome.
General Fiction
Mma Precious Ramotswe is back in Alexander McCall Smith's latest book, THE DOUBLE COMFORT SAFARI CLUB. This book is just what readers have come to expect from this series: kind, insightful, and deliciously African.
Sci-Fi/Fantasy
I'm back on the Robin Hobb kick. She has a new one out called DRAGON KEEPER and it takes place in Rain Wilds, part of the same world as the Mad Ships Trilogy and the Assassin Trilogy. I went back and read the first two trilogies again and loved them even more.
Middle Readers
The Golden Hamster series, by Dietlof Reiche, and illustrated by Joe Cepeda is a terrific series for kids AND parents. I enjoy reading these as much as the kids. They are funny, unique and surprisingly literary for the age group. Start with the first book where the reader is introduced to the incomparable Freddy. It's called I, FREDDY.
Post if you've read or are reading any of these. I'd love to talk books! Be sure to post or email with your suggestions. We all love a good book.
I'll be back later with some more ideas. I'm looking at my TO READ pile right now and I see a mystery, some general fiction, and some more non-fiction. I'll post suggestions all summer.
Editing A Friend's Manuscript: Suggestions or Rewrites?
Posted by
Lateia Elam Sandifer
on Thursday, June 24, 2010
A dear friend recently sent me a novel she's been working on for some time. She asked me to edit it before she begins the submission process. Not only is this person a dear friend, but she's also a fantastic writer. I'm looking forward to delving into her thriller. But as I was reading the first few lines, I realized I had to delicately balance my suggestions for improvement with my urge to rewrite certain passages.
No matter how talented or experienced a writer is, there are going to be issues---be they typos, plot holes, inconsistencies---in a 100K manuscript. I'm certain this one will be very clean, but still, I'm sure I'll find things I'd like to see improved. In addition, my friend expresses herself very differently than I do. I don't want to edit her novel to make it sound like my novel. I want it to remain HER NOVEL.
When you're editing for content, be careful not to rewrite the book. It's imperative that you realize the style differences between you and the author. It's impossible to write in the exact same style as another person. So be careful! Even if you intentions are the best, you don't want to dilute the author's voice with the editor's voice.
Suggest changes, mark passages that didn't work for you. Explain your issue with that particular part of the manuscript. But DON'T, I repeat, DON'T rewrite it. The author's job is to write. The editor's job is to edit.
No matter how talented or experienced a writer is, there are going to be issues---be they typos, plot holes, inconsistencies---in a 100K manuscript. I'm certain this one will be very clean, but still, I'm sure I'll find things I'd like to see improved. In addition, my friend expresses herself very differently than I do. I don't want to edit her novel to make it sound like my novel. I want it to remain HER NOVEL.
When you're editing for content, be careful not to rewrite the book. It's imperative that you realize the style differences between you and the author. It's impossible to write in the exact same style as another person. So be careful! Even if you intentions are the best, you don't want to dilute the author's voice with the editor's voice.
Suggest changes, mark passages that didn't work for you. Explain your issue with that particular part of the manuscript. But DON'T, I repeat, DON'T rewrite it. The author's job is to write. The editor's job is to edit.
***UPDATED***IMMEDIATE ACTION REQUIRED: Funding to SC Libraries
Posted by
Lateia Elam Sandifer
on Tuesday, June 15, 2010
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Thanks for making all those calls! Early this morning we learned that Governor Sandford's line item veto---which effectively denied state funds to libraries---has not been allowed to stand. Libraries WILL> be funded in the FY2011 budget. All the calls and emails to your legislators WORKED!
Governor Sanford's vetoes to the FY11 State budget include two line items that cut $6.5 million in State funds for libraries and jeopardize the receipt of an additional $2.7 million in Federral Library Services and Technology funds. Effectively, if these vetoes stand, public libraries in South Carolina will receive ZERO dollars from the state.
It is imperative that you contact your House Representative immediately to let them know how vital libraries are to their communities and ask that the Budget Vetoes 31 and 92 be overturned. The House is expected to vote on this issue Tuesday, June 15. (THAT'S TODAY, FOLKS!)
Additonally, Governor Mark Sandford has vetoed the budget for the South Carolina Arts Commission, which helps to fund non-profits like SCWW.
If you don't know who to call, click on the link below to find your House Representative.
http://www.scstatehouse.gov/cgi-bin/zipcodesearch.exe
Please, PLEASE, PLEASE flood the offices our legislators with calls demanding our public libraries and the Arts Commission be funded.
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If you are a South Carolina resident, call your SENATOR today!Governor Sanford's vetoes to the FY11 State budget include two line items that cut $6.5 million in State funds for libraries and jeopardize the receipt of an additional $2.7 million in Federral Library Services and Technology funds. Effectively, if these vetoes stand, public libraries in South Carolina will receive ZERO dollars from the state.
It is imperative that you contact your House Representative immediately to let them know how vital libraries are to their communities and ask that the Budget Vetoes 31 and 92 be overturned. The House is expected to vote on this issue Tuesday, June 15. (THAT'S TODAY, FOLKS!)
Additonally, Governor Mark Sandford has vetoed the budget for the South Carolina Arts Commission, which helps to fund non-profits like SCWW.
If you don't know who to call, click on the link below to find your House Representative.
http://www.scstatehouse.gov/cgi-bin/zipcodesearch.exe
Please, PLEASE, PLEASE flood the offices our legislators with calls demanding our public libraries and the Arts Commission be funded.
Angi Morgan: ARE YOU READY TO BE PUBLISHED?
Posted by
Lateia Elam Sandifer
on Thursday, June 10, 2010
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Thanks once again to South Carolina Writer’s Workshop for having me as a guest. When Lateia asked me to blog every three weeks about the ten months between my initial sale and when my Hill Country Holdup hit bookshelves, I wondered what I’d ever find to share that may be interesting.
There were a lot of topics to choose from today. A lot of things have happened for my career this past month or so. I have a second sale to announce. And thanks to my terrific agent, .38 Caliber Cover-Up will be a February 2011 Harlequin Intrigue release. I just received the title this morning and I’m announcing it here first. I haven’t even told my hubby yet (he’s out of town).
I love it. It fits the story perfectly. And no...*I* didn’t think of it. LOL
So since May 13th, I’ve sold my second Intrigue with a very quick delivery date at the end of July. The sale happened on May 28th. I haven’t even received the contract for .38 Caliber Cover-Up, but I’ve finished the AFS (Art Fact Sheets) for the cover, submitted blurbs, and was assigned my title. I’m still waiting on the cover for my first Intrigue which is released in September.
It all feels surreal. Last year at this time, I was awaiting the July results of the Daphne du Maurier contest (where I received the requests from my agent and editor). This year at the national Romance Writers of America conference in July, I’ll find out the results of the Golden Heart winners. (For those of you not in RWA, the GH is the highest unpublished writing award the organization offers. HCH was still eligible as See Jane Run last November when I entered.)
Things change fast. So my question for you today is this: ARE YOU READY TO BE PUBLISHED?
I’m certain that everyone who hasn’t experienced that First Sale Call is thinking this is a fairly silly question. OF COURSE YOU’RE READY. And yes, everyone’s ready to experience the euphoria of selling their book, their baby manuscript, their dream. But are you ready for the work?
This is not a disillusionment article. I am so excited I can hardly keep myself in my chair to type. But sharing this experience is sharing the reality. If I can have two sales with two releases just months apart...then so can you.
Be prepared. Have more than one manuscript ready for submission. Have your website established and ready to update. Have your social networking practices--including limiting the amount of time you network--in place. Research what type of publicity you want. How much money are you going to spend (making certain you don’t spend your entire advance). Are you going to blog? Or just be a guest blogger? Where? How often? Do you give yourself time-lines and deadlines before you sell? Do you work harder to finish a deadline you set for yourself or just shrug it off as not important? Do you give yourself a reward for finishing/completing those deadlines?
Lots or questions and I know there are more. These are a few things for you to begin thinking about. It’s extremely easy to take two years to polish and finesse a manuscript. But if you want a career as a writer, you need to make a very important decision: How many books per year are you capable and WILLING to write (and polish)? When you sell your first manuscript and they ask for a second...will you be ready?
This week’s lesson (to be) learned: For me, learning how to juggle (think about) three manuscripts at once is something I did early in my writing career. Getting back to that capability isn’t a struggle, it’s just changing a pattern. My advice for the unpublished author who wants to write at least two books per year is to learn how to WRITE one manuscript, PLOT one manuscript, and EDIT one manuscript --yes, all at the same time.
‘Til next time,
~~Angi
AngiMorgan.com
Some upcoming topics of discussion:
-An On-Going Behind the Scene Look at Getting Ready for Publication
(promotion, character sheets, log-lines, bios, etc.)
-My Hero Has Brown Hair?
-Targeting Your Book & Choosing Your Market
-Seeing Your Cover For The First Time
There were a lot of topics to choose from today. A lot of things have happened for my career this past month or so. I have a second sale to announce. And thanks to my terrific agent, .38 Caliber Cover-Up will be a February 2011 Harlequin Intrigue release. I just received the title this morning and I’m announcing it here first. I haven’t even told my hubby yet (he’s out of town).
I love it. It fits the story perfectly. And no...*I* didn’t think of it. LOL
So since May 13th, I’ve sold my second Intrigue with a very quick delivery date at the end of July. The sale happened on May 28th. I haven’t even received the contract for .38 Caliber Cover-Up, but I’ve finished the AFS (Art Fact Sheets) for the cover, submitted blurbs, and was assigned my title. I’m still waiting on the cover for my first Intrigue which is released in September.
It all feels surreal. Last year at this time, I was awaiting the July results of the Daphne du Maurier contest (where I received the requests from my agent and editor). This year at the national Romance Writers of America conference in July, I’ll find out the results of the Golden Heart winners. (For those of you not in RWA, the GH is the highest unpublished writing award the organization offers. HCH was still eligible as See Jane Run last November when I entered.)
Things change fast. So my question for you today is this: ARE YOU READY TO BE PUBLISHED?
I’m certain that everyone who hasn’t experienced that First Sale Call is thinking this is a fairly silly question. OF COURSE YOU’RE READY. And yes, everyone’s ready to experience the euphoria of selling their book, their baby manuscript, their dream. But are you ready for the work?
This is not a disillusionment article. I am so excited I can hardly keep myself in my chair to type. But sharing this experience is sharing the reality. If I can have two sales with two releases just months apart...then so can you.
Be prepared. Have more than one manuscript ready for submission. Have your website established and ready to update. Have your social networking practices--including limiting the amount of time you network--in place. Research what type of publicity you want. How much money are you going to spend (making certain you don’t spend your entire advance). Are you going to blog? Or just be a guest blogger? Where? How often? Do you give yourself time-lines and deadlines before you sell? Do you work harder to finish a deadline you set for yourself or just shrug it off as not important? Do you give yourself a reward for finishing/completing those deadlines?
Lots or questions and I know there are more. These are a few things for you to begin thinking about. It’s extremely easy to take two years to polish and finesse a manuscript. But if you want a career as a writer, you need to make a very important decision: How many books per year are you capable and WILLING to write (and polish)? When you sell your first manuscript and they ask for a second...will you be ready?
This week’s lesson (to be) learned: For me, learning how to juggle (think about) three manuscripts at once is something I did early in my writing career. Getting back to that capability isn’t a struggle, it’s just changing a pattern. My advice for the unpublished author who wants to write at least two books per year is to learn how to WRITE one manuscript, PLOT one manuscript, and EDIT one manuscript --yes, all at the same time.
‘Til next time,
~~Angi
AngiMorgan.com
Some upcoming topics of discussion:
-An On-Going Behind the Scene Look at Getting Ready for Publication
(promotion, character sheets, log-lines, bios, etc.)
-My Hero Has Brown Hair?
-Targeting Your Book & Choosing Your Market
-Seeing Your Cover For The First Time
Critiques, Pitches, Queries: A Cheat Sheet for 2010
Posted by
Carrie McCullough
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2010 pitches,
2010 real-time queries,
2010 SCWW cheat sheet,
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Standard or extended critique? Pitch? Real-time Query? With some many opportunities for one-on-one time with faculty members, how can an attendee get a crash course in who is doing what and for what types of writing?
I’ll admit, even as the conference chair, I have a difficult time keeping all of the faculty names, genres and locations straight (I use index cards). But, as attendees, there are a couple of things you can do before registering. First, read the biographies of the faculty members. Each industry expert who is offering any of these services has a bio page that you can find by going to the faculty page of the conference website. Second, do a little research on the faculty member. If the folks you might be interested in have websites, start there. A Google search never hurts, either. But when all else fails, check out a cheat sheet.
So, here’s a cheat sheet for writers so they’ll make the most of their time at the 20th Annual South Carolina Writers’ Workshop conference. I’ve listed the type of item offered, a brief explanation of what it is and then a list of the faculty members and the genres they’ll work with at the conference.
Due to the length and sheer volume of information, I will provide an individual post for each type of one-on-one meeting. It will include a short description before getting to the nitty gritty of who is looking at what.
When all else fails, shoot me an e-mail or call one of the the volunteers listed on the SCWW website. We'll be more than happy to help you.
So, there you have it. A cheat sheet for choosing one-on-one time with faculty members. Remember, you may purchase as many critiques, pitches and queries as you would like. And, for more time to learn what faculty members are looking for, thinking about, reading and just doing as a hobby, don’t forget to register for meals! Friday and Saturday dinners will have faculty-hosted tables. While we ask that you don’t pitch a manuscript during meals, unless the faculty member specifically asks what you’re working on, diners are a great way to learn more about these publishing folks. Sometimes, understanding the “world” they live in helps you to better market the book you want to become a reality.
For the most up-to-date information on the conference, be sure to visit this blog often, and to check out the SCWW website, www.myscww.org/conference.
I’ll admit, even as the conference chair, I have a difficult time keeping all of the faculty names, genres and locations straight (I use index cards). But, as attendees, there are a couple of things you can do before registering. First, read the biographies of the faculty members. Each industry expert who is offering any of these services has a bio page that you can find by going to the faculty page of the conference website. Second, do a little research on the faculty member. If the folks you might be interested in have websites, start there. A Google search never hurts, either. But when all else fails, check out a cheat sheet.
So, here’s a cheat sheet for writers so they’ll make the most of their time at the 20th Annual South Carolina Writers’ Workshop conference. I’ve listed the type of item offered, a brief explanation of what it is and then a list of the faculty members and the genres they’ll work with at the conference.
Due to the length and sheer volume of information, I will provide an individual post for each type of one-on-one meeting. It will include a short description before getting to the nitty gritty of who is looking at what.
When all else fails, shoot me an e-mail or call one of the the volunteers listed on the SCWW website. We'll be more than happy to help you.
So, there you have it. A cheat sheet for choosing one-on-one time with faculty members. Remember, you may purchase as many critiques, pitches and queries as you would like. And, for more time to learn what faculty members are looking for, thinking about, reading and just doing as a hobby, don’t forget to register for meals! Friday and Saturday dinners will have faculty-hosted tables. While we ask that you don’t pitch a manuscript during meals, unless the faculty member specifically asks what you’re working on, diners are a great way to learn more about these publishing folks. Sometimes, understanding the “world” they live in helps you to better market the book you want to become a reality.
For the most up-to-date information on the conference, be sure to visit this blog often, and to check out the SCWW website, www.myscww.org/conference.
2010 Real-time Query Cheat Sheet
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Carrie McCullough
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Real-time Queries: This is a new addition to the South Carolina Writers’ Workshop conference. As an attendee, you’ll bring your one-page query letter with you to a 15-minute meeting with a faculty member. The industry expert will read it, as an agent or editor would in an office. Then, you’ll get a gut reaction, advice, suggestions and maybe even a request for materials! Appointment times will be given to you at when you check in at the registration desk.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
3. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
4. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
5. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
6. Irene Goodman – Memoir, Narrative History Non-fiction, Music Non-fiction, Social Issues and Commentary Non-fiction, Animal Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Judaica Non-fiction, Anglophilia Non-fiction, Francophilia Non-fiction, Crafts, Lifestyle, Historical Fiction, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Literary Fiction and Mystery.
7. Jeff Kleinman – Narrative Non-fiction, Memoir, Health Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Aging Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Pet Non-fiction, How-to Non-fiction, Science Non-fiction, Politics Non-fiction, Military Non-fiction, Espionage Non-fiction, Equestrian Non-fiction, Biography, Suspense, Thriller (not Mystery), and Literary Fiction.
8. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive non-fiction.
9. Anna Webman – Historic Fiction, Mainstream Fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
10. Joshilyn Jackson – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Novellas, Short Fiction, Upmarket Fiction, Literary Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Humor Non-fiction.
11. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
12. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
13. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
14. Hank Phillippi Ryan – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Suspense and Romantic Suspense.
15. Michelle Howry – Non-fiction only – specifically Personal Narrative, Memoir, Health, Self-help, Finance, Psychology, Relationships, Parenting, Foodie, Biography, History and Science and Technology.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
3. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
4. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
5. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
6. Irene Goodman – Memoir, Narrative History Non-fiction, Music Non-fiction, Social Issues and Commentary Non-fiction, Animal Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Judaica Non-fiction, Anglophilia Non-fiction, Francophilia Non-fiction, Crafts, Lifestyle, Historical Fiction, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Literary Fiction and Mystery.
7. Jeff Kleinman – Narrative Non-fiction, Memoir, Health Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Aging Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Pet Non-fiction, How-to Non-fiction, Science Non-fiction, Politics Non-fiction, Military Non-fiction, Espionage Non-fiction, Equestrian Non-fiction, Biography, Suspense, Thriller (not Mystery), and Literary Fiction.
8. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive non-fiction.
9. Anna Webman – Historic Fiction, Mainstream Fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
10. Joshilyn Jackson – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Novellas, Short Fiction, Upmarket Fiction, Literary Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Humor Non-fiction.
11. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
12. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
13. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
14. Hank Phillippi Ryan – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Suspense and Romantic Suspense.
15. Michelle Howry – Non-fiction only – specifically Personal Narrative, Memoir, Health, Self-help, Finance, Psychology, Relationships, Parenting, Foodie, Biography, History and Science and Technology.
2010 Pitches Cheat Sheet
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Pitches: You’ll meet for 10 minutes of one-on-one time with a faculty member. Attendees usually spend about 5 minutes giving their pitch and 5 minutes of getting advice and possibly a request for material! Appointment times will be given to you at when you check in at the registration desk.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
3. Josh Adams – Children’s, Middle Grade or Young Adult.
4. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
5. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
6. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
7. Jeff Kleinman – Narrative Non-fiction, Memoir, Health Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Aging Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Pet Non-fiction, How-to Non-fiction, Science Non-fiction, Politics Non-fiction, Military Non-fiction, Espionage Non-fiction, Equestrian Non-fiction, Biography, Suspense, Thriller (not Mystery), and Literary Fiction.
8. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive non-fiction.
9. Roseanne Wells – Literary Fiction, Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Mystery (not cozy), Narrative Non-fiction, Trade Science, Humor Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, True Crime, Religion, Travel Non-fiction and Food/Cooking Non-fiction.
10. Anna Webman – Historic Fiction, Mainstream Fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
11. Joshilyn Jackson – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Novellas, Short Fiction, Upmarket Fiction, Literary Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Humor Non-fiction.
12. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
13. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
14. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
15. Hank Phillippi Ryan – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Suspense and Romantic Suspense.
16. Michelle Howry – Non-fiction only – specifically Personal Narrative, Memoir, Health, Self-help, Finance, Psychology, Relationships, Parenting, Foodie, Biography, History and Science and Technology.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
3. Josh Adams – Children’s, Middle Grade or Young Adult.
4. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
5. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
6. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
7. Jeff Kleinman – Narrative Non-fiction, Memoir, Health Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Aging Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Pet Non-fiction, How-to Non-fiction, Science Non-fiction, Politics Non-fiction, Military Non-fiction, Espionage Non-fiction, Equestrian Non-fiction, Biography, Suspense, Thriller (not Mystery), and Literary Fiction.
8. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive non-fiction.
9. Roseanne Wells – Literary Fiction, Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Mystery (not cozy), Narrative Non-fiction, Trade Science, Humor Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, True Crime, Religion, Travel Non-fiction and Food/Cooking Non-fiction.
10. Anna Webman – Historic Fiction, Mainstream Fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
11. Joshilyn Jackson – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Novellas, Short Fiction, Upmarket Fiction, Literary Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Humor Non-fiction.
12. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
13. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
14. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
15. Hank Phillippi Ryan – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Suspense and Romantic Suspense.
16. Michelle Howry – Non-fiction only – specifically Personal Narrative, Memoir, Health, Self-help, Finance, Psychology, Relationships, Parenting, Foodie, Biography, History and Science and Technology.
2010 Extended Critiques Cheat Sheet
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Extended critiques: A faculty member reads, ahead of time, 30 pages of your manuscript. Then, you meet with the faculty member for 20 minutes at the conference for a critique, other words of wisdom, and maybe a request for more of your material! Appointment times will be given to you at when you check in at the registration desk.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
3. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
4. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
5. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
6. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive Non-fiction.
7. D. Anne Love – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
8. Anna Webman – Historic Fiction, Mainstream fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
9. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
10. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
11. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
12. Hank Phillippi Ryan – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Suspense and Romantic Suspense.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
3. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
4. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
5. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
6. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive Non-fiction.
7. D. Anne Love – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
8. Anna Webman – Historic Fiction, Mainstream fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
9. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
10. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
11. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
12. Hank Phillippi Ryan – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Suspense and Romantic Suspense.
2010 Standard Critiques Cheat Sheet
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Standard critiques: A faculty member reads, ahead of time, 10 pages of your manuscript. Then, you meet with the faculty member for 20 minutes at the conference for a critique, other words of wisdom, and maybe a request for more of your material! Appointment times will be given to you at when you check in at the registration desk.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Therese Fowler – Women’s Fiction
3. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
4. Josh Adams – Children’s, Middle Grade or Young Adult.
5. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
6. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
7. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
8. Jeff Kleinman – Narrative Non-fiction, Memoir, Health Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Aging Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Pet Non-fiction, How-to Non-fiction, Science Non-fiction, Politics Non-fiction, Military Non-fiction, Espionage Non-fiction, Equestrian Non-fiction, Biography, Suspense, Thriller (not Mystery), and Literary Fiction.
9. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive non-fiction.
10. Roseanne Wells – Literary fiction, Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Mystery (not cozy), Narrative Non-fiction, Trade Science, Humor Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, True Crime, Religion, Travel Non-fiction and Food/Cooking Non-fiction.
11. D. Anne Love – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
12. Anna Webman – Historic fiction, Mainstream Fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
13. Joshilyn Jackson – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Novellas, Short Fiction, Upmarket Fiction, Literary Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Humor Non-fiction.
14. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
15. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
16. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
17. Michelle Howry – Non-fiction only – specifically Personal Narrative, Memoir, Health, Self-help, Finance, Psychology, Relationships, Parenting, Foodie, Biography, History and Science and Technology.
1. Richard Morris – Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Science Fiction, Current Affairs Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Narrative Non-fiction and Politics Non-fiction.
2. Therese Fowler – Women’s Fiction
3. Rachelle Gardner – Women’s Fiction, Historical Romance, Romantic Suspense, Young Adult, Health Non-fiction, Self-help Non-fiction, Memoir and Christian Non-fiction.
4. Josh Adams – Children’s, Middle Grade or Young Adult.
5. Daniela Rapp – Mystery, Thriller, Memoir, Animal Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Travel Non-fiction, Food Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction, Language and Writing Non-fiction, History Non-Fiction and Native American.
6. Jill Marr – Women’s Fiction, Multi-cultural Fiction, Historic Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Self-help Non-fiction, Inspirational Non-fiction, Cookbook, Memoir (especially Travel or Foodie), Parenting Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, Health and Nutrition Non-fiction, Pop Culture Non-fiction, Humor Non-fiction and Music Non-fiction.
7. Diana Fox – Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Women’s Fiction, Thriller, Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Graphic Novel, Memoir, Biography and Narrative Non-fiction.
8. Jeff Kleinman – Narrative Non-fiction, Memoir, Health Non-fiction, Parenting Non-fiction, Aging Non-fiction, Nature Non-fiction, Pet Non-fiction, How-to Non-fiction, Science Non-fiction, Politics Non-fiction, Military Non-fiction, Espionage Non-fiction, Equestrian Non-fiction, Biography, Suspense, Thriller (not Mystery), and Literary Fiction.
9. Wendy Sherman – Women’s Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Prescriptive non-fiction.
10. Roseanne Wells – Literary fiction, Young Adult, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Mystery (not cozy), Narrative Non-fiction, Trade Science, Humor Non-fiction, History Non-fiction, True Crime, Religion, Travel Non-fiction and Food/Cooking Non-fiction.
11. D. Anne Love – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
12. Anna Webman – Historic fiction, Mainstream Fiction, Middle Grade and Young Adult.
13. Joshilyn Jackson – Women’s Fiction, Romance, Novellas, Short Fiction, Upmarket Fiction, Literary Fiction, Memoir, Narrative Non-fiction and Humor Non-fiction.
14. Susan Hawk – Children’s, Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction.
15. Maryglenn McCombs – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller.
16. Caitlin Alexander – most Fiction and Non-fiction, excluding Science Fiction, Fantasy, Self-help Non-fiction and Children’s.
17. Michelle Howry – Non-fiction only – specifically Personal Narrative, Memoir, Health, Self-help, Finance, Psychology, Relationships, Parenting, Foodie, Biography, History and Science and Technology.
Critiques Take II or Oh, yeah, I forgot to tell you . . .
The other day when I posted the information on critiques---formatting, where to send it, etc---I forgot to clearly state two things.
1. Your critique materials MUST be the first ten (10) or thirty (30) pages of your manuscript. Do not send a chapter in the middle of your book. Our agents and editors specifically want to see the beginning of your manuscript. (Thanks, M.L.)
2. The deadline for submitting critiques is as follows:
Electronic version: Must hit my inbox no later than midnight on September 1, 2010.
Hard Copy: Must be postmarked on or before September 1, 2010.
These are hard deadlines. In order to get materials to faculty members in ample time, the materials must be organized and transmitted by the second week in September. It takes me about a week to get everything sorted and sent---and it's a very busy week. (Thanks, Angie.)
Let me know if you have additional questions. You can email me or post to comments.
Watch out for Carrie McCullough's upcoming blog. It will be divided into several parts and will give the ins and outs of each faculty member.
1. Your critique materials MUST be the first ten (10) or thirty (30) pages of your manuscript. Do not send a chapter in the middle of your book. Our agents and editors specifically want to see the beginning of your manuscript. (Thanks, M.L.)
2. The deadline for submitting critiques is as follows:
Electronic version: Must hit my inbox no later than midnight on September 1, 2010.
Hard Copy: Must be postmarked on or before September 1, 2010.
These are hard deadlines. In order to get materials to faculty members in ample time, the materials must be organized and transmitted by the second week in September. It takes me about a week to get everything sorted and sent---and it's a very busy week. (Thanks, Angie.)
Let me know if you have additional questions. You can email me or post to comments.
Watch out for Carrie McCullough's upcoming blog. It will be divided into several parts and will give the ins and outs of each faculty member.
Registration is OPEN!
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Registration is open for the 2010 South Carolina Writers Workshop Conference!
If you intend to pay using a check, please use the link below
https://www.eventville.com/catalog/eventregistration1.asp?eventid=1006929
If you intend to pay using a credit or debit card, please use the link below
https://www.eventville.com/catalog/eventregistration1.asp?eventid=1006943
If you have questions about the conference, please visit our website at
Conference Critique Pointers: FAQ Take 1
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Conference registration opens on June 5. Since that's only a couple of days from now, I thought it might be time to answer some questions that have built up since last year.
Before I cover some FAQs I want to make one thing totally clear. If you purchase a standard critique, send ONLY ten (10) pages of the material. You may send an optional one (1) page synopsis. I will not send any more than tweleve (12) pages to the faculty member: cover, synopsis, manuscript. The same goes for extendeds. Send only thirty (30) pages, the cover and the optional synopsis, bringing the total to thirty-two pages. If you send more, I will return the electronic copy to you and you'll have one chance to delete the extra pages. Beyond that I will destroy the copy and it will not be sent to the faculty member and you will not get a refund. Send ONLY what's asked for and included in the purchase price.
1.How should I format the hard copies I send to you?
Although some agents and editors have particular instructions for submissions, for the conference, it's best to stick with standard formatting. All critiques should be in Times New Roman or Courier 12pt font. They should be printed on regular printer paper (20lb., 92 brightness). Make sure all your margins are 1". For the header, place your name and the working title of your manuscript in the upper left hand corner. In the upper right, insert the page number and the estimated word count (if you know it). Send a title page, for each of the two copies, with the title of the manuscript and your contact information. You may send a one-page synopsis if you'd like--standard format. Bind each copy together with a binder clip, rubber band or paper clip. Now for the DON'T part: no report covers, no staples and please, PLEASE no cardstock weight paper.
2.How about the formatting for the electronic copy?
Save the electronic copy as a .DOC or .RTF. Name the file like this:
Before I cover some FAQs I want to make one thing totally clear. If you purchase a standard critique, send ONLY ten (10) pages of the material. You may send an optional one (1) page synopsis. I will not send any more than tweleve (12) pages to the faculty member: cover, synopsis, manuscript. The same goes for extendeds. Send only thirty (30) pages, the cover and the optional synopsis, bringing the total to thirty-two pages. If you send more, I will return the electronic copy to you and you'll have one chance to delete the extra pages. Beyond that I will destroy the copy and it will not be sent to the faculty member and you will not get a refund. Send ONLY what's asked for and included in the purchase price.
1.How should I format the hard copies I send to you?
Although some agents and editors have particular instructions for submissions, for the conference, it's best to stick with standard formatting. All critiques should be in Times New Roman or Courier 12pt font. They should be printed on regular printer paper (20lb., 92 brightness). Make sure all your margins are 1". For the header, place your name and the working title of your manuscript in the upper left hand corner. In the upper right, insert the page number and the estimated word count (if you know it). Send a title page, for each of the two copies, with the title of the manuscript and your contact information. You may send a one-page synopsis if you'd like--standard format. Bind each copy together with a binder clip, rubber band or paper clip. Now for the DON'T part: no report covers, no staples and please, PLEASE no cardstock weight paper.
2.How about the formatting for the electronic copy?
Save the electronic copy as a .DOC or .RTF. Name the file like this:
yourlastname_titleofmanuscript.
For example, if my manuscript was named The Devil and Hotdog Smith, here's how the file would look once I save it.elamsandifer_thedevilandhotdogsmith.rtf
Include all three elements, manuscript, synopsis, and cover page, in ONE file. If I get your manuscript and it's not in the right format, I will return it to you and ask that you save it in the right format. To select the format, To do this, open your document, go to SAVE AS. Name your document (see instructions above) and then in the drop down, below the name, select one of the above formats.I hate to be a stickler for this but it's imperative, for all sorts of compatibility issues, that I get the files in this format. While I would like to be able to just fix it for you, I neither cannot nor will not do that. I do not want to alter your work, intentionally or otherwise, in any way.
3. How will I know you got my stuff?
When I get your materials, I will send you an email confirming they arrived safe and sound. In the case of hard copies, I will stamp them with the date and file them alphabetically. In the case of electronic copies, I will open them and check for any file corruption issues. If you have emailed or mailed your materials and you have not heard from me in a reasonable time frame, feel free to email. Please give the Post Office (and me) ample time to process your materials before you email.
4. Where do I send my stuff?
For the hard copies, mail them to the address below. Please copy this address EXACTLY to avoid any snags in delivery.
Lateia Elam Sandifer
SCWW Critiques
PO Box 503
Bamberg, SC 29003
For the electronic copies, attach your file and email them to:
5. Can I revise my manuscript once I send it to you?
No. I will only accept the first version you send, unless of course there is some major disaster like my computer crashes or your file is corrupt. There's a lot of planning behind this aspect of the conference and to be fair to everyone, I cannot accept revisions. Make sure you send the best, most polished version to me. If you attempt to send a revision, the email will be returned with the attachement unopened and any hard copies will be shredded.
6. Can I change my faculty choices after you get my materials?
No. Once the manuscript has been received and assigned, there will be no changes---unless the faculty member is for some reason unable to accomodate your manuscript.
7. What if I query my faculty member before the conference and receive a rejection letter after I've chosen that person to critique my work?
Tough. My advice would be to refrain from querying the person(s) you select for critique. It can make for a very awkward meeting. Save the query letter until after you've met at the conference.
8. If my book sells before the conference, can I get a refund for my critique?
Once your materials have been received, logged in and confirmed, there will be NO refunds for critiques. Check out our policy for conference attendance refunds on the registration grid.
9. When will I find out who my critique was assigned to?,
When you check in, at the registration desk, you will be given a card that lists the details of your critique appointment(s). I will not be able to tell you who you are assigned to until that point. I'm not trying to be a meanie, but since the schedule is so complex, it may change several times before it's finalized. However, since you are able to select your top three choices of faculty member, I will guarantee that you get one of those three people. If I cannot accomodate your requests, I will call or email you and we can figure out what is the best way to handle the conflict. If I cannot offer you a critique slot with someone that fits your needs, I will happily refund your critique fee.
10. Will you call me if you see something terribly wrong with my manuscript so I can change it before it's sent to a faculty member?
If there is a problem with the file--corruption, weird characters, in another language---I will contact you and offer you the opportunity to resend. However, I will not, in any way, edit or read-though your submission for content or for copy-editing purposes. I will occassionally read the first couple of paragraphs to make sure your manuscript matches the requests of the faculty member. It is your sole responsibility to be comfortable and confident with your work before you send it to me.
Email me with any questions you have--or post to comments--and I'll answer them. It's best to get the questions out of the way before the rush of materials in late summer.
The Ten-Thousanth "Mommy" of the Day or Tips on Writing Dialogue
Anyone who's a parent understands what the ten-thousanth "Mommy" of the day is like. When you have small children in the house, you're likely to hear "mommy" or "daddy" hundreds, if not millions, of times each day. You feel like you just might snap, go running for a one-bedroom effeciency in Kansas City if you hear it one more time.
Don't "Mommy" your reader to death, or move to Kansas City for that matter. (Although Kansas City is a fine place. Shout out to Gates BBQ. If you haven't tried it, start programming your GPS. http://www.gatesbbq.com/ )
When you're writing dialogue, keep the following points in mind:
1. Your characters are different. (At least they should be.) Gender, race, and personality all figure into how a person expresses him or herself. Make sure the reader can tell who's talking by HOW they're talking.
2. If you're writing is good, the reader should be absorbed enough in your story to KNOW who's talking. There's no need to keep referring to characters by proper name. Keep it to a minimum.
3. Dialogue should be well-paced. It should fit the vibe and feel of the story. By constantly using your characters' names in dialogue, you slow the rhythm, stilt the feel of it.
Here's an example of how NOT to do it:
"George, did you get orange juice when you went to the grocery store?"
"No, Linda. It wasn't on the list."
"How am I supposed to manage running the house, George, without some help from you every now and then? You should've known I meant to put it on the list."
"So, Linda, you think I'm a mind-reader?"
"George, go back to the store and get some. Now, George."
Compare the above to this:
"Where's the orange juice?" The plastic bag rattled as Linda wadded it into a ball and shoved it in the trash. "How did you forget the most important item on the list?"
George shook his head. "It wasn't on the list." He took the list from the back pocket of his worn jeans and ran his finger along each line. "I don't see it."
She turned, snatched the list from his hand. "I know I put it on the list." Her eyes ran down each line once, then twice. "You're right, honey. It's not on here."
"I'll be right back," he said. He kissed her on top of the head and grabbed his keys from the bowl on the table.
Don't you get a better feel for the situation and the characters? Dialogue should be used to move a story forward or to develo character. Don't use it as placeholder or because you're too lazy to impart information in a craftier way. The reader wants to *hear* your characters. Make them jump off the page. (The above dialogue doesn't give one much to work with---it's OJ after all---but hopefully you get the idea.)
Don't "Mommy" your reader to death, or move to Kansas City for that matter. (Although Kansas City is a fine place. Shout out to Gates BBQ. If you haven't tried it, start programming your GPS. http://www.gatesbbq.com/ )
When you're writing dialogue, keep the following points in mind:
1. Your characters are different. (At least they should be.) Gender, race, and personality all figure into how a person expresses him or herself. Make sure the reader can tell who's talking by HOW they're talking.
2. If you're writing is good, the reader should be absorbed enough in your story to KNOW who's talking. There's no need to keep referring to characters by proper name. Keep it to a minimum.
3. Dialogue should be well-paced. It should fit the vibe and feel of the story. By constantly using your characters' names in dialogue, you slow the rhythm, stilt the feel of it.
Here's an example of how NOT to do it:
"George, did you get orange juice when you went to the grocery store?"
"No, Linda. It wasn't on the list."
"How am I supposed to manage running the house, George, without some help from you every now and then? You should've known I meant to put it on the list."
"So, Linda, you think I'm a mind-reader?"
"George, go back to the store and get some. Now, George."
Compare the above to this:
"Where's the orange juice?" The plastic bag rattled as Linda wadded it into a ball and shoved it in the trash. "How did you forget the most important item on the list?"
George shook his head. "It wasn't on the list." He took the list from the back pocket of his worn jeans and ran his finger along each line. "I don't see it."
She turned, snatched the list from his hand. "I know I put it on the list." Her eyes ran down each line once, then twice. "You're right, honey. It's not on here."
"I'll be right back," he said. He kissed her on top of the head and grabbed his keys from the bowl on the table.
Don't you get a better feel for the situation and the characters? Dialogue should be used to move a story forward or to develo character. Don't use it as placeholder or because you're too lazy to impart information in a craftier way. The reader wants to *hear* your characters. Make them jump off the page. (The above dialogue doesn't give one much to work with---it's OJ after all---but hopefully you get the idea.)